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Move some of the extraneous paragraphs about the org to the bottom

components/jobs/creative-director/jd.mdx

@@ -7,21 +7,11 @@ As Creative Director, you'll mastermind and execute a strategy to present Hack C
 
 The mission of **[Hack Club](https://hackclub.com)** is to be a place where teenagers can become more technical, feel welcome in getting started, feel inspired to build with code in ways that are always honest, transparent, high-integrity, kind and friendly. We want students to self-organize and assert themselves as persons.
 
-When successful, Hack Club will be a nationwide cultural institution, creating a new generation of young people with the skills, network, and value system to become problem-solvers and builders for the 21st century. 100 years ago, the Boy and Girl Scouts emerged and guided young people with values and skills and an identity, as the economy transitioned from agriculture to industry. We see Hack Club as a modern Boy and Girl Scouts, and we need you to help us tell our story as we become a nationwide organization and a new teen identity.  
+When successful, Hack Club will be a nationwide cultural institution, creating a new generation of young people with the skills, network, and value system to become problem-solvers and builders for the 21st century. 100 years ago, the Boy and Girl Scouts emerged and guided young people with values and skills and an identity as the economy transitioned from agriculture to industry. We see Hack Club as a modern Boy and Girl Scouts, and we need you to help us tell our story as we become a nationwide organization and a new teen identity.  
 
-You’ll be working alongside Hack Club COO, Christina Asquith, who founded and led [The Fuller Project](https://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2016/03/women-foreign-correspondents/472596/) for nearly a decade, and sparked an awareness amongst newsroom leaders of stories about women and girls around the world, particularly in war. She led fundraising for the first $7 million; and has 20 years of journalism experience reporting for news outlets like The New York Times, The Atlantic and The Economist.
+We'll be working together in this effort. I founded and led [The Fuller Project](https://www.theatlantic.com/international/archive/2016/03/women-foreign-correspondents/472596/) for nearly a decade, and sparked an awareness amongst newsroom leaders of stories about women and girls around the world, particularly in war. I led fundraising for the first $7 million; and have 20 years of journalism experience reporting for news outlets like The New York Times, The Atlantic and The Economist.
 
-Together with the founder and COO, you will drive the creation of Hack Club's storytelling, leading in publishing op-eds, essays, blogs and think pieces;  producing our live AMA events (like our [AMA with Elon Musk](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=riru9OzScwk)), and crafting of creative ways to directly communicate Hack Club’s ideas to CEOs and leaders who support our movement. Join us if you’re excited about taking a startup to its next stage, launching an idea that will change the world alongside a creative, adventurous and spirited team working in a fast-paced environment.
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-**About Hack Club, a 501(c)(3) nonprofit, global organization:**
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-Founded in 2014 by a teen hacker on the internet, 500 Hack Club are running today in high schools across the US and world. Nearly 12,000 students across the US and in 22 other countries have joined our online community, the most popular network of technically talented teenagers in the world. Since 2016, Hack Club has raised $2.8 million, and appeared in The Wall Street Journal, California Sunday Magazine, and The Today Show. Since COVID shut down schools, and Elon Musk tweeted Hack Club was "a cool group", our online community grown 700 percent.
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-Hack Club staff works directly with 14-18 year olds, as they run their own clubs and build amazing projects, including a weather balloon that sent an Arduino into space, a summer project that distributed $50k in hardware, a program to send thousands of hand-written cards to front-line COVID workers, a robot from recyled parts in Zambia, and so much more.
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-Hack Club operates with zero cost to school systems or taxpayers; has no teachers or curriculum; is remote and online; and is totally free and accessible to all teenagers regardless of race, gender or economic background. Our model works in rich, poor, urban and remote schools. Hack Club is also fully transparent with its finances, and operates at one of the lowest costs per student in the nonprofit sector. We rarely do corporate partnerships. 
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-We pride ourselves in being a coding education nonprofit that acts more like a tech-start up. Our work environment is fun, challenging, risk-taking, and high-energy. We are structured, but support flexible hours.
+Join me if you’re excited about taking a startup to its next stage, and launching an idea that will change the world alongside a creative, adventurous and spirited team working in a fast-paced environment.
 
 **Your Week at Hack Club:**
 
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 - Tell Hack Clubber student stories. Hack Club uncovers hidden Einsteins, and their work can inspire you. We want those projects shared in video, articles, websites and Twitter threads. Do you have a killer news instinct that you can train onto our community, and break stories, and connect that to bigger news events?
 
-- Partner with the COO, who works across the organization on strategy, communications, fundraising, networking and storytelling. Be excited to build Hack Club, and take on the huge range of tasks that are needed in a startup.
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 **About You:**
 
 - You have stellar 21st century journalism skills, meaning you can write, report, do basic video editing, tweet, post, make graphs, write a succinct email and will learn basic design software
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 - You can demonstrate a creative/weird/fearless side
 
-- You can leave a brainstorm meeting, do some reporting, and come back with a killer first draft and ideas where to place it
+- You can leave a brainstorm meeting, do some reporting, and come back with a first draft and ideas where to place it
 
-- Great executive functioning and organizational skills to manage up the founder and COO
+- You have good executive functioning and organizational skills to manage up the founder and COO
 
 - You are a stickler for grammar and clean copy. Fact checking matters to you
 
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 \- Christina Asquith, COO, and Zach Latta, Executive Director
 
 P.S. If you're technical, you can apply by running `$ ssh jobs.hackclub.com` in your terminal.
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+**More about Hack Club, a 501(c)(3) nonprofit, global organization:**
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+Founded in 2014 by a teen hacker on the internet, 500 Hack Club are running today in high schools across the US and world. Nearly 12,000 students across the US and in 22 other countries have joined our online community, the most popular network of technically talented teenagers in the world. Since 2016, Hack Club has raised $2.8 million, and appeared in The Wall Street Journal, California Sunday Magazine, and The Today Show. Since COVID shut down schools, and Elon Musk tweeted Hack Club was "a cool group", our online community grown 700 percent.
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+Hack Club staff works directly with 14-18 year olds, as they run their own clubs and build amazing projects, including a weather balloon that sent an Arduino into space, a summer project that distributed $50k in hardware, a program to send thousands of hand-written cards to front-line COVID workers, a robot from recyled parts in Zambia, and so much more.
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+Hack Club operates with zero cost to school systems or taxpayers; has no teachers or curriculum; is remote and online; and is totally free and accessible to all teenagers regardless of race, gender or economic background. Our model works in rich, poor, urban and remote schools. Hack Club is also fully transparent with its finances, and operates at one of the lowest costs per student in the nonprofit sector. We rarely do corporate partnerships. 
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+We pride ourselves in being a coding education nonprofit that acts more like a tech-start up. Our work environment is fun, challenging, risk-taking, and high-energy. We are structured, but support flexible hours.