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 [Hack Club](https://hackclub.com) is a 501(c)(3) nonprofit that supports high school coders in starting coding clubs, hackathons, and building awesome projects. Founded in 2014, Hack Club's mission is to support, inspire and motivate teenagers from all backgrounds to become highly-technical, and use their computer skills to solve problems.
 
-Hack Club is a fun, quickly-growing start-up, run by highly-creative engineers, building programs every day for thousands of teenagers from around the world. Watch a video of our summer train trip <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BID8_pGuqA> to learn more about Hack Club, and to see the sort of projects you would be supporting. Highly technical Silicon Valley founders donate to Hack Club, and we want to sustain and grow that network. The first $5 million has been raised from a dozen committed donors, and the right candidate can leverage our network to build a sustainable $5m-$7m a year donor network. 
+Hack Club is a fun, quickly-growing start-up, run by highly-creative engineers, building programs every day for thousands of teenagers from around the world. Formerly headquartered in Silicon Valley, Hack Club recently relocated to Burlington, Vermont area, and employs a growing staff of 12. 
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+Hack Club advances its mission in 4 ways: teen-led after-school computer science clubs, an online technical community for teenagers, a fiscal sponsorship program for hackathons and a series of in-person and online technical educational events. Currently, Hack Club runs the most active online community for technical teenagers in the country. Our fiscal sponsorshops operates for nearly 400 teen leaders who raised and spent $2m last year. Hack Clubs operate in 22 countries. 
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+Watch a video of our summer train trip <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BID8_pGuqA> to learn more about Hack Club, and to see the sort of projects you would be supporting. We are governed and advised by a small board of tech founders who are active in building out our donor network. To date, Hack Club has raised $5 million from a dozen committed donors, and the right candidate can leverage our network to build a sustainable $5m-$7m a year donor network. 
 
 We are looking for an experienced head of philanthropy, however we also invite more junior people to apply (details below).  
 
-The ideal candidate can devise a philanthropy strategy, and lead on executing it. They'll be excited to play a pivotal role in scaling Hack Club to reach hundreds of schools across America. They can demonstrate strong, persuasive writing skills, creative communications, a strategic mindset, and a deeply-held passion for creating opportunity for teenagers from all backgrounds. Actual work includes writing emails, proposals, building and maintaining a donor system, working with designers and filmmakers, crafting messaging and listening. Hack Club is a lot of fun, and the right person in this role will change the world. The person in this position will report to COO Christina Asquith, and this position is a great fit for hard-working parents who need flexibilty in their schedule to balance it all. The right candidate could build out our strong existing network inside the tech industry, while also diversifying our funding with foundations.
+The ideal candidate can devise a philanthropy strategy, and lead on executing it. They'll be excited to play a pivotal role in scaling Hack Club to reach hundreds of schools across America. They can demonstrate strong, persuasive writing skills, creative communications, a strategic mindset, and a deeply-held passion for creating opportunity for teenagers from all backgrounds. 
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+Hack Club is a lot of fun, and the right person in this role will change the world. The position reports to the Chief Operating Officer, Christina Asquith. 
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+this position is a great fit for hard-working parents who need flexibilty in their schedule to balance it all.
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 **Responsibilities include:**
 
 - Write convincing emails
 - Build and steward relationships with donors
-- Research foundations and craft proposals
-- Conceptualize and plan events
+- Research foundations and craft proposals working with designers
+- Conceptualize and plan events 
 - Maintain donor systems
 - Work closely with the COO and the founder to prepare materials to initiate, steward and close funding asks
 - Contact media and coordinate event coverage
+- Diversify our funding source with foundations.
 - Engage in personal networking and leverage the capacity of other team members, and the board to make contacts and engage, secure, and retain donors.
 
 **Qualifications:**