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@@ -6,10 +6,6 @@ Hack Club advances its mission in 4 ways: teen-led, after-school computer scienc
 
 Currently, Hack Club runs the most active online community for technical teenagers in the country. Our fiscal sponsorshops operates for nearly 400 teen leaders who raised and spent $2m last year. Hack Clubs operate in 22 countries. 
 
-Our catchphrase is: By teenagers, for teenagers. Hack Clubbers build a large part of Hack Club, and all our donor materials, and our donations, are kept publicly in our GitHub and totally-transparent financial ledger. This transparency inspired Elon Musk to tweet that Hack Club was a "cool group" (and give a major gift!)
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-Watch a video of our summer train trip <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BID8_pGuqA> to learn more about Hack Club, and to see the sort of projects you would be supporting.
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 We are governed and advised by a small board of tech founders who are active in building out our donor network. To date, Hack Club's COO has raised $5 million from a dozen committed donors, and the right candidate can leverage our highly-connected network to build a sustainable $5m-$7m a year donor network.  
 
 Hack Club is becoming the 21st century's Boy and Girl Scouts. The right person in this role will change the world. 
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 **Responsibilities include:**
 
+First and foremost, your goal is to raise $5-7million a year in 2022, and the COO can support that. 
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 **Fundraising**
--Tee up the COO/CEO to close on major gifts
--Research foundations, craft proposals, initiate new relationships
--Manage and prioritize leadership's time
--Prepare presentation materials
+- Tee up the COO/CEO to close on major gifts
+- Research foundations, craft proposals, initiate new relationships
+- Manage and prioritize leadership's time fundraising
+- Prepare presentation materials
 - Engage in personal networking and leverage the capacity of other team members, and the board to make contacts and engage, secure, and retain donors.
 
 **Strategy and planning**
--Devise with leadership a donor brand and keep us focused
--Build Hack Club's donor management system-- simple at first, and we can grow it
--Review call transcripts and craft strategies
--Manage touchpoints for existing donors 
+- Devise with leadership a donor brand and keep us focused
+- Build Hack Club's donor management system-- simple at first, and we can grow it
+- Review call transcripts and craft strategies
+- Manage touchpoints for existing donors 
 
 **Communications**
 - Strong writing skills- you'll be crafting a lot of personal emails or drafting for the founder
 - Occasionally contact media and coordinate event coverage
 - Conceptualize and plan dinners/parties/1:1s 
   
-  Thanks for your interest in Hack Club!
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+  **GOAL**: The right candidate will successfully know that they and the COO can raise $5-$7million in 2022.  
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+Lastly, our philosophy is: By teenagers, for teenagers. Hack Clubbers build a large part of Hack Club, and all our donor materials, and our donations, are kept publicly in our GitHub and totally-transparent financial ledger. This transparency inspired Elon Musk to tweet that Hack Club was a "cool group" (and give a major gift!) 
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+Watch a video of our summer train trip <https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BID8_pGuqA> to learn more about Hack Club, and to see the sort of dreams you'd be making come alive! Thanks for your interest in Hack Club. - Christina, COO
 
 **How to Apply:** Email jobs@hackclub.com with "kesef" in the subject line, 3 bullet points demonstrating why you would be exceptional for the role, and your resume. Salary commensurate with experience.